Rachel knows full well that he’s recognized her as his mate but she blows this off. He wants her to love him for who he is as a man, not to be forced to be with him by the hormones. He doesn’t want to kiss her, which will infect her with the hormones and send her into heat as well. And having her close by just makes it worse for him. Because Jonas’s beast has recognized Rachel as his mate, he’s being eaten alive with the symptoms of the mating heat. Unfortunately, things just get worse from there. She yells at and blames Jonas for everything, while never appreciating anything he does for her. She’s just a very unpleasant person all the way around. Rachel kicks up a fuss about this, because that’s what she always does. ![]() Jonas insists that Rachel and Amber will stay with him now, until the doctor can be caught. ![]() But after all the tests, they don’t find anything and Amber seems to be getting better so they release her. The bad guy is a doctor who wants to try to use the breeds to make people immortal, since once they’re mated they don’t age anymore, and the breeds have tangled with him before. They baby is lethargic, so they’re sure the bad guy injected her with something. They take Amber to The Sanctuary where the medical staff check her out. But yeah, let’s just blame Jonas for everything, it’s totally all his fault. And never mind that the breeds are the victims here and shouldn’t be blamed when psycho bad guys attack them. Never mind that Rachel knows perfectly well that psychos are always gunning for the breeds, so she knew all along that there was an element of risk to the job but she took it anyway. Never mind that Jonas had never wanted her to work for him in the first place, but was forced into it. She just keeps saying it’s all Jonas’s fault anyway, for putting them in danger. Rachel doesn’t give Jonas even a passing thought, and certainly not a thank you for saving Amber’s life. He’s got glass imbedded in him from jumping through the window, and is just bruised and battered from absorbing the blast in order to protect the baby. So again, then WHY THE H*LL WERE YOU JUST GOING TO GO BACK THERE AND GIVE THEM THE FILE IF YOU KNEW IT MEANT YOUR DEATH? Jonas pulls together some men, bursts into the house, rescues the baby, and then the house is blown sky-high. ![]() Rachel admits that she knew this already, she’d seen it in their eyes. Jonas tells Rachel that handing over the file won’t save her baby, Amber, because the bad guys will just kill her and Rachel both anyway. Just what the h*ll is going on here? Some men are holding her baby hostage? When was the baby even born? Last time we saw Rachel, she was only 5 months pregnant! And why didn’t we read about these bad guys bursting into Rachel’s house? Why do we skip that exciting plot point and instead just come in on her going to steal the files? And what file is this? What’s in it? Why does the bad guy want it? And why is she blaming Jonas, of all people, for this event? Why didn’t she call him for help the moment she was let go? Just what the H*LL is happening?!!? This whole scene was just really poorly written. That being around him has put her and her daughter in danger and he’s going to hand over those files immediately because she won’t allow him to play games with her daughter’s life.Īll of this was extremely confusing. Jonas is there and she goes berserk screeching about how this is all his fault. These bad guys are holding her daughter hostage and she has been told to bring back some mysterious “file” to give to them. Rachel is rushing into the office in the middle of the night, having been roughed up by some bad guys. So after their first inauspicious meeting were she acts aloof and disrespectful, the story breaks and suddenly it’s seven months later. We’re also told that he recognized her as his mate as soon as he saw her, but he doesn’t want to claim her, because of everything that brings with it. She just flat out refuses most of his orders and he’s got no way of disciplining her because someone higher up in the pride has given him a direct order to employ her. ![]() She’s already pregnant by another man, which I wasn’t a fan of, and she treats Jonas with complete disrespect most of the time. The story begins with Jonas being forced to accept Rachel as his personal assistant. And the overarching plot was barely there, so there was nothing to distract me from the awful relationship. His mate, Rachel, was an annoying little ice queen who treated Jonas like dirt for most of the book. And this book just didn’t do him justice. I haven’t read every book in the Breeds series, but I’ve read enough to have met Jonas before and liked him.
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